writing prompts from the Creative Writing Ink Website

I wrote this in less than eighteen minutes, a bit of a record, even for me and I wasn’t even sitting in a dentists waiting room.  Most of my poetry occurs in waiting rooms — you can probably tell!  I use the term poetry very loosely, it’s more a brain work out for the other stuff.  I know, W.B would turn in his grave, but it’s never going to be something that I’ll do too seriously anyway, so does it count?  

I think some things are just for fun.  See below, the eighteen minute poem, as a result, ignore the obvious spelling/grammar problems!

Newt’s Boots

Every soul has a story,

Maybe, these old boots have earned their glory,

In sun and sand and wind and flood,

The boots may have been caked in mud.

Their journey soon, it’s end in sight,

For time’s long friend there appears no flight.

Perhaps today they came to pass,

A long awaited rest, lush meadow grass.

And there, three soliders sat to rest,

Left bags, and hats and boots possessed

Of years and miles of service good

To stand close by while in the darkened wood.

While weary travellers took a soak

In cool clement waters beneath the oak.

Their tired bodies, cleaned and rested,

They lay on grass now infested

With soft black slugs and hungry beetles

Nesting in their boots, not leathal.

But sore as hell and slurpy too,

What’s a man to do, but throw off his shoe.

So now you see the boots there drying,

Taking from the water implying

Days and days of long hard work

No, these boot just went beserk.




Creative Writing Ink Prompt May 22nd


Book Review – Dark Water

Dark Water, by Caro Ramsay.  Penguin.

The third instalment set in Glasgow with DS Costello and DS Anderson and their team at Patrick Hill Station.  This time round, we see a little more team spirit with the Superintendent – although Quinn still knows she is an outsider.  Quinn once more gives us a great insight into the relationships at play in Patrick Hill Station.

Dark Water starts out with the death of a small time criminal and finishes up with Anderson and Costello solving not just one, but several crimes.  They work their way seamlessly from Glasgow’s rough crime underbelly up to the glamorous and privileged existence of Scotland’s favourite thespian and her family.

In the course of the investigation, they learn as much about themselves – Anderson where he’s going and Costello where she’s coming from!  In the end, it is the questions that Costello has been afraid to ask which provide the most provoking and revealing answers of all.

A satisfying crime novel with characters that are really beginning to feel like they’ve been around a long time – in the nicest possible way!


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Singing to the Dead – a book review

Singing to the Dead.

Caro Ramsay.  Penguin 2009

This book started out as Tamborine Girl – whoever changed the title deserves a chocolate muffin – new one is much better – I think!
Ramsay builds well in her second outing. We are again led through a dark and gritty Glasgow by DS Anderson and DS Costello.  This time the team are under serious pressure in the run up to Christmas with half the Patrick Hill force on sick leave; two missing boys and a returning rock star who’s taking up more resources than he should.

Weaved throughout the investigation we catch a glimpse of Anderson’s crumbling marriage and his confusion over his feelings for Helen Mc Alpine, his deceased colleague’s widow.  Every thing is thrown into mayhem with the threat of losing his son Peter and eventually, Anderson is forced to question who he actually trusts and who he just wants to trust.

Alan Mc Alpine’s successor is not finding her role too easy either and we learn as much about the team from her outsider’s perspective as we do from either Anderson or Costello.

A thoroughly enjoyable read and a couple of satisfying twist and turns along the way. Ramsay paints a dark and gritty picture of Glasgow to rival even Rankin’s Edinburgh – – more please!
8 /10


Book Review – Absoloution


Caro Ramsay; Penguin 2007.

When Alan Mc Alpine is transferred to Patrick Hill station to lead out the murder team investigation into the deaths of two local women he finds himself revisiting his own ghosts from the past.  Twenty years earlier as a young P.C., Mc Alpine fell in love with a mysterious young woman, the victim of a viscious acid attack.  The girl died after giving birth to a baby daughter and committing suicide, still her identity remains a mystery to the Glasgow police force.

On his return to his old stomping ground Mc Alpine finds she dominates his thoughts more and more.  Mc Alpine is ably assisted on the current murder case by DS Anderson and DS Costello.  Ramsay manages to combine the grittiest of Glasgow with the greatest tenderness – Mc Alpine is a truly complex and unique character.  This is a satisfying crime novel interlaced with the story of unrequited love experienced not just by Mc Alpine.  Absoloution weaves its way through Glasgow and beyond.  Darkness manages to creep across the ages, the shadows of Glasgow and the unforgiving Scottish coastline a stark reminder of the violence which may lurk beneath even the most unprepossessing of characters.   In the end it is the crimes of the present which bring closure for Mc Alpine on the questions from the past and the girl he has never truly let go.  Sometimes, answers come at too high a price, but then maybe it’s a price Mc Alpine is happy to pay for absoloution.

This is a great book, the first in a series of three so far!